Monday, 14 January 2013

Assistant Director Notes - 30/11/12



WELCOME TO THEBES REHEARSAL
 – 30TH NOVEMBER 2012

ACT 3 SCENE


  • Need to work on chorus interaction of Coffee Making
  • Chorus Transition to senators not working yet
  • Lines – A lot of books still out
  • Pg 65 – Needs to seem more casual – Not sure about characterization
  • Omar – Walking about a bit unclearly – Will come when lines are learned.
  • Losing A LOT of time with uncertainty – ques, entrances, lines
  • Transitions between moments/Split scenes –sloppy
  • Pg 69 – Not charged enough – The power of guns. The stakes should be much higher!
  • Que Lines – Terrible! Be aware of when you interject and be confident to keep going.
  • Chorus Reaction – Needs to be clearer.
  • Really clunky at this point
  • Haemon – Needs to commit to saving scud
  • The stakes need to be raised!!
  • P80 - Cannot see Jamahyl behind people
  • Need to work on reactions
  • Harry - Nice truth behind character – still on book
  • Elysse – Good work on role
  • Needs more progress with learning ques and lines
  • Pg86 – It’s in danger of getting a bit boring at this point if the scene before isn’t on point.
  • Jamahyl - strongest moments are when he snaps out of his established voice.

ACT 4


  • Transition needs work
  • Singing – Bit uncommitted
  • Loosing time still on uncertainty
  • Omar and Kadeena really coming together, enjoyable to watch
  • Need to go over Dominic’s blocking
  • Transitions between split screens need to be a lot clearer, have a lot more power.
  • Need to work on funeral – again with the stakes. How important is this funeral to everyone.
  • Entrances and exits need a lot more purpose
  • Olivia – On point with lines and ques, and development of meaning


ACT 5
 
  •   James – Character coming along really well
  • Omar – Try to win Paul over – Entertain him more, but good 
  •  Chorus interaction.
  • Paul great progress, really nice work 
  •  P101 Omar – Really nice 
  •  Keep the peace – what does that mean? Context of Syrian protests, good to look at the context and what certain things mean in relation…..
  • Paul – Revelation – Such a pinnacle moment in character journey – needs to be really powerful
  • Can’t see Dominic behind Jimena.
  • Needs a lot more understanding of political jargon, relationships, what actions  and partnerships mean for the country 
  • P105 Omars reaction needs to be really sophisticated
  • Paul’s journey – he’s now talking about myths and fear
  • REACTIONS!!!
  • Kitty – Bigger moment with knife.
  • Clearer split scenes
  • Pg 109 – Needs to parallel there first scene – but otherwise really good
  • Paul – Such an epic moment – really strong but I want it to be stronger
  • Haemon – Work that stick
  • CHARACTER JOURNEYS NEEDS TO BE SO STRONG

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